From: Daisyane Barreto
Subject: Desk Crit
To: cjh9123@uga.edu
Hi Jea,
I really like the overall appearance of your project and the theme that you chosen - now, I wanna go snowboarding ;). Also, it is organized well and pretty easy to follow. I like the way you structured the website. The instructions on your project are very clear and you used a lot of visual aid, which helps users like me to understand how to snowboard.
There are few suggestions and comments that I would make to your project. First, I noticed that you used some sort of mask on the picture in the snowboard gear section. The color that you used in this mask is white and the woman in the picture is wearing a white outfit with some white accessories. This is just a detail, but it would be good if you could change the color of the mask to a light blue or something similar, so the user can see better what part he is selecting.
The other thing that I noticed and I’m not sure if this has something to do with my default browser (firefox), but some of the web links on the bottom of the page were not visible. Apparently, you are using a white color for the web links and I could not see because of the white background that you have. You might want to change that.
On the Snowboarding Skills, riding skills 2, there is a section called traversing. There is graphic picture on this section teaching the steps and how to do it. I had one idea when I saw this graphic. You could make a guide motion animation in flash or even let the user drag the snowboard men from the top to the bottom. This is just an idea and a minor detail for you project; I just thought it would be fun :).
Well, I think that’s all that I have. I really enjoyed your project and I think everybody will want to practice snowboard. You did a great job ;)!
Best regards,
Daisy
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