From: Daisyane Barreto
Subject: Desk Crit
To: buckeyes@uga.edu
Hi Sarah,
I’m really sorry for sending you such late desk crit. This semester has been crazy for me. I’m really sorry that.
Your project is really good :-)!! It’s very neat and I really like your idea. I know that the project itself is very special and personal to you since it’s related to your grandfather and his time in the navy.
I just have a few suggestions to your scrapbook and you might have already addressed those. I love the navigation items that you have in your site. They are really neat. However, I would suggest you to move them to the left side of your webpage ( or have all them align on the top of the page) and make them a little bit smaller. The reason of my suggestion is because by doing so you could have more free space on the right side of your webpage for pictures. I noticed that most of the time you need to scroll down to see the pics. So it would be good to have the pics following text.
Also, I think you could have some “roll overs” on the navigation items or some sort of labels just to make it clear for the users which is the content information that they will see once they clicked the button.
I guess that’s all that I have. I like the overall idea of your project and I hope this desk crit helps you. You did a great job and I think you project look very good :). Please, let me know if you need further feedback/information from me.
See you tomorrow on the showcase ;)!!
Daisy
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